my little poetic/musical corner

this first one is a song i wrote that im working on music for

End up that way

When you get old
You just do what youre told
Don't question society
Just blend in with the crowd

Are we the only ones who see
That everyones part of the conformity
It doesnt matter what we do or what we say
It looks like we all end up that way

I would say rebel, be unique and free
But how do you rebel when thats conformity?
Whatever we do, however we act
Were gonna end up the same, and thats a fact

Are we the only ones who see
That everyones part of the conformity
It doesnt matter what we do or what we say
It looks like we all end up that way

We don't wanna conform, but live our lives as us
We listen to rock, ignore adults and yell and curse
Were teenagers, and thats all weve got
A sense of self-loathing and a whole load of pot

Are we the only ones who see
That everyones part of the conformity
It doesnt matter what we do or what we say
It looks like we all end up that way


and heres one i just wrote on the spot

alone

people fear me
they wont come near
would they even notice
if i disappear

im the emo kid sitting on my own
all i want is to be left alone

unlike the rest of you
what i wear doesn't matter
my clothes are all black
some with blood splatter

im the emo kid sitting on my own
all i want is to be left alone

i really dont care
if you hate me or not
i find pleasure in pain
because its all that ive got

im the emo kid sitting on my own
why wont you leave me alone

i shot my friend the other day
unfortunately hes ok

i sit alone in my dark room
i will fell deaths embrace soon

someone comment on my writing i wanna know what you guys think